Living Safely in CalgaryIn my opinion, I think that Calgary is a very safe city to live in. Most of the areas have no crime and you don’t see the police going into people’s houses to arrest bad people. And you don’t see crazy things happening in Calgary on the news. Calgary is a lot safer than my hometown in Libya since they don’t have a strong police force over there at the moment but things are getting better over there. To protect ourselves from crime, we have to choose good communities to live in that are close to police stations and we should call the police if we see something not normal around our community. We also have to have an alarm system in the house and we have to make sure that all of the doors and windows are locked before leaving the house. But even if we didn’t follow all of these steps to protect ourselves, Calgary is still a safe city to live in.
I'm glad to hear that things are improving in Libya. I agree, Calgary is a safe place, and most people who are victims are involved in bad things like drugs.
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Your grammar is very good! Just remember to use a comma before "but" and "so".